If the journalism did notice the essence of this issue , it would open up its diversity program, now focused narrowly on race and gender, and look for reporters who differ broadly by outlook, values, education, and class.
【词汇突破】diversity 多样性 differ 不同(不及物动词):例.Tastes differ.萝卜青菜各有所爱。 outlook 世界观 values 价值观
【主干识别】it would open up its diversity program and look for reporters.并列动词
【其他成分】If this group
did notice the real difference 状语从句;now
focused narrowly on race and gender 过去分词作状语;who differ broadly by outlook, values, education, and class. 定语从句作后置定语。
【难点揭秘】后置定语过长,影响对并列动词的识别造成阅读的难点。
如果新闻界真的注意到了问题的关键,它就应该进一步开放其多样化项目,这个项目现在还只单纯考虑招收不同种族和性别的员工,新闻界应该进一步寻找那些世界观、价值观、教育水平和社会阶层都大相径庭的各种记者。
【翻译点拨】过长的后置定语可以单独成句。